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Post by Personnel Representative on Sept 7, 2008 14:53:16 GMT -5
Grammatical Aid and Peer Review
I thought it would be interesting to include a section on the site where you could have your paper’s reviewed by your peers on this site. I’m suggesting this due to the lack of members over the age of 20, and figured the best way for the youngin’s to learn more on how to speak and spell would be to have them post their work that we can review for them to help them improve their reading and writing skills. This would help them as individual’s and can practically eliminate the whole “I can’t be a part of this site because I have to focus on my school work” as we are now motivating you to do the work in order to be critiqued before handing it in, and it will also limit the amount of academic stupidity this site surely contains. So now more poor writing!
Let me know what you think to have peer revision. Ultimately, anyone can review your work once you post it, but it’s up to you as to who you take the true advice from. Keep in mind a few members are either working towards or have their degrees in post-secondary and are likely a bit more detailed and precise than a grade 7 student telling you not to start a sentence with a coordinate conjuction.
Mike
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Post by madman55 on Sept 7, 2008 15:05:42 GMT -5
I agree, it would help members like TB, NYR, Buffalo, etc.
I know i'm not perfect, but atleast i'm readable.
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Post by PR's Old Account (DO NOT PM) on Sept 7, 2008 15:10:37 GMT -5
Yeah, and the best part of this is PR has an Honours degree in English, and Leafs is doing pretty much the same thing. So we're masters of the language, and you can ask Leafs, PR is pretty much an expert on essays. . So that being said, even if everyone hates this suggestion (which they shouldn't - its solid) you can always PM me and get in touch for essay help or paper editing, or anything like that. Eventually I do plan to teach, so its all good stuff. Cheerio
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Post by Personnel Representative on Sept 7, 2008 15:16:23 GMT -5
I am in the same boat as PR, and yes, essay wise, he's got a thousand tricks up his sleeves. I'm not joking when I say that he can get an A on a paper by writing a single line. I've learned from him that by taking one word from a book, you can write a 20 page paper. So we're not slouches in this department. I suggest we make a new section called Peer Review, people can post their papers and such, and others can quote sections and show how to repair them, or give detailed responses as to why it is good, and why it is bad, and even deliver an immediate grade on the paper. Then that member can revize it and repost it and it will then be critiqued once again, each time will be a thorough examination of the language and the purpose of the paper. Our members should in fact gain higher marks in their academics thanks to our help. These systems are used in Universities to help people better their writing skills. We're providing that help here as well.
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Post by PR's Old Account (DO NOT PM) on Sept 7, 2008 15:22:31 GMT -5
making section now.
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Post by bruinsftw on Sept 7, 2008 15:37:18 GMT -5
YAY, i have a paper due tommorrow....
im in grade 9
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Post by PR's Old Account (DO NOT PM) on Sept 7, 2008 15:38:26 GMT -5
well you've got my inbox number
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Post by 0luke0 on Sept 7, 2008 15:55:16 GMT -5
I'm not that bad in english...... I get 80+ on english almost alwys
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Post by foreign on Sept 7, 2008 15:57:43 GMT -5
80 in grade 8 proves nothing im afraid...not to be harsh
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Post by carbon on Sept 7, 2008 16:16:56 GMT -5
I could also help out some, I'm in grade 12 and have done fairly well in English over the past years.
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Post by Colorado Avalanche on Sept 7, 2008 16:39:42 GMT -5
sounds like a good idea, i just started university and i can already tell i will have A LOT of writing to do in the coming months. I got 86 in english 12 so i should be able to help our younger members too.
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Post by 0luke0 on Sept 7, 2008 17:26:54 GMT -5
heh heh I just checked my report card.
I got 79 in reading 90 on writing and 84 in oral and visual communication!
So It's not too bad. Dont worry about me though I know my english.
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Post by xx-Former Avalanche-xx on Sept 7, 2008 17:30:44 GMT -5
My wife says my oral skills are amazing.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2008 17:33:18 GMT -5
haha lol
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Post by bruinsftw on Sept 7, 2008 17:36:07 GMT -5
LMFAO!
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Post by islesfan90 on Sept 7, 2008 18:42:18 GMT -5
Thanks for sharing Isles.
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Post by xx - former Devils GM - xx on Sept 7, 2008 20:22:55 GMT -5
haha
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Post by Anaheim Ducks on Sept 7, 2008 21:25:43 GMT -5
My wife says my oral skills are amazing. ... Only Spitty
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Post by madman55 on Sept 7, 2008 22:57:55 GMT -5
Isles, that was what she told me as well. But..... my giving abilities are better
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Post by PR's Old Account (DO NOT PM) on Sept 7, 2008 23:06:22 GMT -5
okay so Florida took the funny out of that...
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